January 2007 Archives

The Longest Day

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Okay, I'm totally worn out today. I taught four writing workshops at Meadowlark with some very enthusiastic students. The kids were great. I was pretty impressed in the first class when the kids were allowed to drink tea during class. The teacher was treating the kids as if they were adults, and I was impressed at how well the kids accepted their roles. They even had some pretty cool ideas. I was secretly howling at the ending when the rabid dogs bit off the vet's arm. It was pretty dark, but it was also pretty funny and bang on as an ending.

After the session, I had to rush home and deal with e-mail and then prepare for a reading at the Children's Literature Round Table. Because of my brother's birthday dinner, I was late for the session, but the organizers had put me at the end of the night. The audience was great, but I think I've reached the end of the line for my clothes shopping story. It's starting to become a crutch. Tonight was the first time in a while that I didn't tell the story, and I felt energized by the fear of having to rely on new material. I think my nose story might become a good replacement. I also think I have to come up with new stories. Time to raid my idea files.

Meadowlark - Day 1

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Okay, I just finished meeting five different groups of students at Meadowlark today. I was pretty impressed with everyone's ideas. Even the kindergarten teacher showed me a piece of writing from one of her students that was pretty cool. My favourite moment of the day had to be working on the play for the assembly. It was great fun to do some theatre exercises. I hope everyone remembers to do a warm up and to practise their animal characters. The more you can lose yourself in your character, the less nervous you will be!!!

Also I'd like to give a big shout out to my guides for the day. K. and M., thanks for getting me where I needed to go.

Story Avenue

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Whew! What a day. I did four writing sessions for various grade five and six students during the pilot project, Story Avenue. I had a blast working in the main meeting chambers of the Edmonton Public School Board. A few of the students were fascinated by the microphone buttons. We did a little exercise in coming up with conflict and drama in a story, and the morning session students were keen to write stories. I had a lot fun working with the afternoon students, too. In fact, the last session had a pretty cool demonstration story about a guy who had to save his kidnapped girlfriend, but she fell in love with his limo driver.

Anyway, I had a blast with the kids, and I hope that Story Avenue comes back for another year.

Am I Paranoid?

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Has anyone else noticed that their computers are picking up security threat alerts? In the last two weeks, my anti-virus software has detected and blocked at least 2 or 3 e-mails with viruses attached. It strikes me as incredibly coincidental that these virus attacks are happening right around the time of the launch of the new Windows Vista operating system. Of course, one of the big features of this program is the improved security features. Isn't it a mantra of sales techniques to create an environment of fear so that you can spawn a need for the product (ie. if you are obese, you are in danger of heart disease, stroke disease, diabetes, etc., so subscribe to our weight loss programs, diet pills, exercise clubs). I'm probably just paranoid. Bill Gates, if your minion are reading this blog entry, please don't send your cyber-hounds to rip my computer to shreds. You'll force me to go back to being a Mac user... oh, how I wished I'd always stayed with Mac!

Ecole Father Jan Students Are Awesome!

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My head is spinning from today's presentation. I had the pleasure of speaking with the grades 3 - 6 students at Ecole Father Jan in St. Albert. I wanted to give a big thanks to the grade five students for raising the funds to bring me to your school. I hope that I gave you your money's worth.

I'm always amazed at how well the sessions go when the students read the books (or part of the books) beforehand. Today was another great example of the kids being excited to hear about the real life inspirations. However, I think the teachers were even more keen to hear about the inspirations, because some of them knew the teachers and students in Morinville. Yikes! I suspect my stories are going to get back to a few people.

Anyway, I had great time at the school, and I just wanted to say one more big thank you to the grade five students for making my visit possible.

Easy Distractions

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If you want a good strategy to avoid work, buy something on-line. I just ordered a new GPS to help me find all the schols that I have to visit in the next year. I made the mistake of ordering it on-line with the option to pick up the item from the store. I've been checking my e-mail every five minutes in the hopes of getting the notification that my GPS is ready for pick up. To kill time, I tried to work on my latest Edmonton Journal article (all about marriage proposals), but for every sentence I've typed, I've hopped on to the internet to check my e-mail. Well, the notice just came.

All work is shut down for the next four hours while I get my new toy. I fully intend to get back to work as soon as I get back... well, I guess I have to make sure the thing works too. Okay, as soon as I drive from one side to the city to the other with the GPS as my guide, I will come home and work. Or I will come home and try to figure out how to mount the GPS in my car.

Day off for Marty!!!! Sometimes, it's good to be a freelancer. Except this most likely means I'm working over the weekend. Sigh.

Lacombe Upper Elementary - Day 2

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Wow! I was so impressed with the students today. The first two sessions must have had some budding authors, because the questions were awesome. I loved talking about the process of writing and publishing. The kids were really keen. The last session of the day was pretty wild, as we tried to turn a canoe trip into a story. The whole thing turned a bit strange with rabid beavers trying to attack our two characters while the Jaws soundtrack was playing, but it was way more imaginative a story than one I could have spun out on my own. The students were great sports.

I'm trying to put up a memorable moment, so that when I look back on these blogs, I can see a little snapshot of my visit. The moment of the day had to be when one of the boys in the front row begged me to stop talking during the Buddy and Max story. He was laughing so hard that he couldn't breathe. He was hilarious. Thanks to all the students from both days. You all made me feel very welcome. Thanks for the two pens. I'll make sure that Max doesn't steal at least one of them.

A Close Shave

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Okay, there's nothing like locking myself in a hotel room for an evening and forcing myself to write. I just cracked off the second chapter of the Video Conference book. It's pretty rough, but I have something that I can revise. As always, going from nothing to something is always the hardest. Now I have a couple of weeks to bang the chapter into shape and show to the students. Hope they enjoy it.

Lacombe Upper Elementary

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I'm writing from Lacombe, where I just finished my last of three sessions for the first day. I have another three presentations tomorrow with the grade 5 and 6 students. The kids were pretty fun today. Some of the kids had read bits and pieces of both books, so I had to adjust my presentation to keep it fresh for them. I hope they enjoyed the stories. I had a great time working with the students on the group demonstrations. One session involved a teacher and got some great laughs. The other session was the last of the day, and I think the students and I were a bit tired because there weren't as many suggestions flying around the room. Still we had fun with a hockey scene, but I think the student playing the main character saved the day with his very funny lines. Thanks!

Phoenix Phooey!!!!

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I'm just getting a taste of the aggravation of this play. We're trying to finalize casting for a workshop, and we can't seem to find two performers. One of them needs to sing and act; the other needs to be acrobat. My valiant director and fight choreographer have been beating the bushes to find someone, anyone, who can fit the bill. I'm pretty confident that we'll be able to land the actor. I'm less confident that we'll have the acrobat lined up. Sheesh! This play is way too ambitious. Next time, I'm doing a one-person show... oh wait, that's what I'm doing for this year's Fringe Festival.

Whew... Forbidden Phoenix

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You ever get into one of those spring cleaning moods? For some reason, I had an urge to blast through the revisions to the Forbidden Phoenix. Originally, I had planned to just cycle through the first act and do a polish. Something happened about half-way through and the polish turned into a revision of the entire play. The second song was moved from the top of the second scene to the top of the fifth scene. Also, the motivation and thruline for the Horne character had to be cleaned up. Some of the lyrics of his song changed, and I'm going to have to look at the lyrics in the light of day (and beside my composer) to make sure they still belong in a song. However, overall, I'm really pleased with the revisions to the play. I felt like I cleaned up a whole bunch of stray threads. The story feels way cleaner now and there's a real sense of momentum from start to end. I even think that the dovetail to the history is getting stronger. While the link is not overtly tied to the railroad, there's enough there that an audience can make the jumps through the allegory into the history. I'll give myself a couple of days before I review the script. If the changes hold together, then I'll make copies and get it out to my actors for the workshop in February.

Alberta Shaky Foundation for the Arts

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I just read Todd Babiak's article about the recent Alberta Foundation for the Arts (AFA) public meeting, where the Executive Director, Jeffrey Anderson, laid out the general direction of the cultural policy of the AFA. Note that I say "cultural policy," not arts policy. Hector Goudreau, the new minister in charge of the Tourism, Parks, Recreation and Culture portfolio has been cagey about how he defines culture. Apparently, the newly-formed ministry will celebrate a marriage of hobbies, recreation, sports and ethnicities, while treating music, literature, theatre, art, dance as the distant cousins who are only invited to funerals.

In Alberta, the level of arts funding has not changed in 20 years, remaining at the level of about $20 million per year. In comparison, the Government has subsidized the horse racing industry to the tune of $190 million since 2002. I’m not that great at math, but if my calculations are right, in just 5 years the horse racing industry has received about half of what arts have received in two decades.

The issue of arts funding in this province has always been a hot point. Case in point, Todd Babiak’s recent columns about the arts have triggered a flood of letters to the editor, attacking Mr. Babiak’s views. The general complaint that I’ve heard time and time again is the specious claim that people do not want their tax dollars spent on activities that they would not patronize. If we follow this logic, then I could argue that I don’t want my tax dollars going to repair or build roads that I’ll never drive on.

However, thanks to the Alberta Government, we don’t have to argue this point, because the money to fund the arts doesn’t come from anyone’s tax dollars. Instead, the money is generated from the lottery fund, so essentially our province’s gamblers are the ones who should have ultimate say about where their money should go.

So, what’s the issue here? Is it the fact that people want to censor what artists do and say? I’d like to think that our citizens have grown beyond this narrow-minded way at looking at the world. Judging by what I read in the letters to the editor pages, the freedom of speech movement is alive and well.

I think that the real issue is the urban versus rural division. With a few exceptions, most arts are centered in the urban centres of the province. The rural taxpayers have mistakenly believed that their money is going to the “city folk,” and the politicians aren’t going to correct this misconception because they can claim to be defenders of the rural voters against the anarchistic artsies in the cities. Meanwhile, the urban-based artists voice their frustration to the government in vain, mistakenly believing that we are marginalized because of our artistic bent, when we are actually being marginalized because we live in the city.

I remember a few years ago, some film producers tried to reinstate film and television funding. Rather than approaching the government directly, they urged the people in rural municipalities, whose economies benefited from film productions near their communities, to lobby their MLAs. The result was that the Government listened. However, while the film industry is mobile and can generate a lot of spin-off economy for rural municipalities, the other arts tend to stay in urban centres.

Here’s my pitch to the arts advocates. Forget trying to get the Government to directly fund the arts. Let’s advocate scrapping the AFA completely, so that Mr. Goudreau can build a Culture Foundation. Instead, let’s advocate that the government establish a community building foundation, which will grant monies to the municipalities to foster cultural activities. Urban centres like Edmonton may be forward thinking and put that money toward the Edmonton Arts Council to increase grant opportunities for the city’s artists. Maybe Calgary would follow suit, or they may develop their own model to support their city’s artists. Rural communities may choose to provide some funding for arts or they may direct all their money to building a curling rink. The money would still come from the lottery fund, but apportioned according to population rather than by riding. This would mean that urban centres would receive more than rural centres, but the argument could be easily made that sometimes rural folks do come into the city to enjoy the arts.

My point is this. In the last 20 years, the province has shown it is not a champion of the arts. Let’s stop pretending that they’ll be able to change their ways and find other ways to funnel the lottery money into communities so that the better-qualified people will be able to champion the arts (or culture if that’s their agenda).

If someone would like to argue that no lottery money should go the arts, then my suggestion is that the VLTs and casino operators should post notices on their machines and tables indicating that the revenue generated from their machines will go to either arts or culture, and leave the gamblers to decide which table or machine they want to support. That way, people have a choice where their gambling dollars go and no one will need to complain any more.


Edmonton Journal Article

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The latest article in the Edmonton Journal's Life section ran today. I was pretty happy with the article, but now that I have a few pieces under my belt, I have to make sure that the next few articles break the routine. I'm worried that the articles may get a bit stale. So, my mission to myself for the next article is to try a new way to tackle the topic.

Inspiration

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Inspiration can come from the strangest places, which is why I think it's so important for writers to pay attention to the world around them. For the last month and a half, I've been researching various topics for a full-scale revision of my kids' play Nearly Normal. I'm attempting to revise this kids play into an adult play that explores the issues of faith, religion, science, evolution, creationism, quantum physics and the golden ratio. I've been reading everything from books about Buddha to Spinoza. My head is spinning with all the research, but last night I found more inspiration from the oddest source: The Colbert Report. The wry host made a joke referring to his Gods' Eye, which is an arts and craft yarn project using two sticks and different coloured yarn. I started to think that Gods' Eye might make for a good title to replace Nearly Normal. I was so intrigued by the name that I researched it this morning and found out it was a charm meant to hang over baby's cribs as a form of projection to ensure long life and health. I'm thinking that Norman might make a Gods' Eye for his father to help heal his stroke. I'm not sure if this idea will fly or not, but it's worth trying out.

Arcola School Rocks

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I had a great time at Arcola School in Regina today. I did a presentation for the grades 3 - 8 students, but I visited the newly-formed reading room first. The girl who thanked me at the end of the presentation was really cool. She was the first to buy a copy of my book, and she said she'd keep it close to her heart. Aww, that breaks my heart. Anyway, the kids were very fun, and we had a cool writing demonstration, using someone's crush to come up with a fun story at a swimming pool. I hope the kids get inspired to write their own stories from this day.

After the session, I had a radio interview on the Afternoon Edition. The host was pretty cool and had me hopping with his questions. The weird thing was to switch tracks to talk about my theatre work, but I think I did fine. The producer seemed happy with the interview.

Tonight, I have the play reading at the University of Regina. I'm looking forward to it. I just hope I don't slip into stories about Buddy and Max.

Edmonton Journal Article

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Bit of a tough slough this weekend. I tried an experiment. I tried to write the article while I was a dramaturge on shift for the 10 Days of Playwriting Madness. I had a shift on Saturday night and Sunday morning. I got about a third of the way through the article when playwrights started to hit me with their script and ask for feedback. On Sunday morning, I didn't get two sentences before people were asking for feedback. I enjoyed reading the scripts and I tip my hats off to the energetic playwrights who would dare to try to write a play in 24 hours. Heck, I couldn't even get 800 words written in 8 hours. I'm going to spend tomorrow morning catching up on the article.

On a side note, my snow shovel article runs this Friday. I take a shot at city snow plows. I'm wondering if the city workers have already read the article because my sidewalk has been piled with snow for the last four days. Hmmm.

Sherwood Park School Visits

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Today, I hit four schools in the Sherwood Park area, including Ecole Campbelltown, Mills Haven, Lakeland and Wes Hosford. Wow, what a workout. Every session was in a gymnasium, and I was so glad to have a microphone at each session, or else I wouldn't be able to talk right now.

Here are some of my favourite moments (in no particular order).

Wes Hosford: One student put a whole new spin on a story about a pet store and a baby turtle when he suggested he wanted to eat it.

Mills Haven: Someone at the back asked if I was related to Jackie Chan.

Ecole Campbelltown: A few of the older boys were too cool for the presentation, but by the end of the session, they were laughing along with everyone else.

Lakeland: For the first time in a while, I nearly broke down when I told my grandmother's story. Thankfully, the students were patient while I composed myself.

I think the coolest thing about the readings is when I sign autographs. The students have so many cool names now that I'm filing them away as potential character names in future books.

Snow Day - Again...

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For the second day in the row, I've had to postpone sessions because of the blizzard. Grrrrr!!!!

I was scheduled to speak at Bruderheim School, Andrew School and A.L. Horton, but old man winter had different plans. The rural roads were so bad that the rural busses were cancelled. I'm now pouting in my office, because I really wanted to do the sessions today. I hate having to cancel presentations, because it takes time for me to build up the confidence and energy to do the sessions. When an event gets cancelled, I have a very hard time switching tracks to work on something else. Imagine your parents telling you that you're going to Disneyland. You get all geared up to go on Space Mountain and the Raiders of the Lost Arc ride, but then the flight gets cancelled and you end up renting Disney movies instead. It's no fun!

Okay, so enough whining. I'm going to take the day to continue working on the first act of The Forbidden Phoenix, and if I have the energy, I'll try to write the lottery article for the Edmonton Journal.

Forbidden Phoenix

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Thanks to the blizzard and cancelled meetings, I have a free day to write. I'm tackling the revisions to the first act of The Forbidden Phoenix, so that I can have a draft ready for the workshop in February. I have to be honest, after 9 drafts of the musical version of the script, I'm sick of looking at the thing. I was hoping some time away from the piece would give me fresh perspective, but I think that this play is in danger of becoming "developed to death." I can't remember who coined the phrase to describe plays that get so many notes that the original spark fades away, but it's very accurate. As I cycle through this draft, I have to remember the original inspiration for the piece or else I'll just be changing things randomly without any guidance.

For me, this is a reminder to take notes on this particular script with caution. I can't be pulling the whole thing down and starting from scratch. A lot of good work has gone into the script and the songs, and I don't want to lose any of that work. At the same time, I know the script still needs improvement. However, I'd be way more motivated if the people telling me what they want to see in the script also said that they were going to produce it. Sigh.

I think I'm at a point where this might very well be the last stage play I try to write for established theatres to produce. Maybe Stewart Lemoine had it right when he produced his own plays under his own theatre banner. The freedom and the total creative control is a powerful attraction.

Okay, enough of the whining. Time to get to work. I know that at the end of the February workshop, I'll either have theatre directors interested in producing the show either in a year or three years, or I'll be able to finally put this script into the grave. Either way, there'll be a sense of closure. I can tough it out for another two months. Wait! That's not a good attitude. I can't just tough it out. I have to care about the script again.

The whole reason why I wanted to tell the story of the Bachelor Men in the first place was because I was angry at the injustice of the Canadian government imposing a racist immigration policy on the Chinese, and I felt that this story needed to be told. I've got to tap into that anger again. That was the original spark. Let's see how far I can get with the revisions.

Bad to be on the Road

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Yikes! I just came back from a series of readings at Elk Island District schools. The morning was great. I visited Uncas and Fultonvale. Roads were clear and dry. When I went to Fort Saskatchewan Junior High, however, I spotted two cars in the ditch. On the way back from the reading, the wind was blowing both snow and my car across the road. Whew! I'm glad to have made it back before the "official" blizzard hit.

Anyway, the students at all three schools were wonderful receptive, and I was surprised that were awake after the Christmas holidays. My favourite moment of the entire day was taking an innocent question from a student and turning it into a creative writing exercise. My thanks to the guy who asked if he could get a drink of water. You totally rocked the session!

A Close Shave - VC Conference

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I'm cycling through the revised draft of the first chapter of A Close Shave this morning to catch a bunch of typos and odd phrasing. Last night, I read the chapter aloud to my wife and caught a whole bunch of mistakes. For some reason, ears can hear mistakes better than my eyes can see mistakes. I don't know why that is, but it makes for a good editing tool. I'll probably get someone to proof the chapter before I submit it. In total, that means that I will have reworked the chapter 3 times. Welcome to the world of writing. It's not about the first draft. It's about the revisions. I hope that the students in the VC conference put the same amount of work into their stories. I'll see everyone on Wednesday.

Dragon Boys - Part I

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I caught the first part of the CBC MOW tonight. I was pretty impressed with it. The script goes beyond the stereotypes of Asians, and I felt that there was a sense of authenticity in all the characters. I found the lead, Bryon Mann, particularly captivating as a police detective with a trouble marriage. I was thrilled to see Jean Yoon play a tough Chinese wife who could stand up to her husband, rather than be a stereotypical victim. She wasn't a dragon lady either, showing a moment of compassion without compromising her character.

I only have one complaint about the movie. There were a couple of overt cultural exposition moments, where the characters dispense cultural information for the sake of a non-Asian audience. I wonder if the writer had to put this in at the request of an over-zealous broadcast development person who didn't think audiences would "get it." However, this is just a quibble. Overall, I'm really happy with the first part and I'm looking forward to watching part two tomorrow.

My only real beef about the experience is with CBC itself. So, the braintrust who is in charge of marketing decided that people who would tune into a drama about Asian gangs would also love to see Little Mosque on the Prairie, a Corner Gas-esque sitcom about Muslims in a Saskatchewan town. Why on earth would someone promote a comedy during a dramatic program? Or is this a case of the CBC executives thinking that they should promote a visibile minority show during a visible minority show because we all like to stick together? There was the odd commercial for Intelligence, CBC's one-hour dramatic series, but there were way more commercials for Little Mosque on the Prairie.

Anyway, I'd recommend catching Dragon Boys tomorrow night.

Dragon Boys - CBC TV Movie

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Tonight, CBC TV airs a new TV movie, titled Dragon Boys. The story is supposed to be about Asian gangs in B.C., but according to the preview articles, the portrayal will be more complex and human than the title would lead you to think. Interestingly enough, in a Globe and Mail Article, Michael Chechik claims that he (tthe Caucasian producer of the movie) should have every right to tell an Asian story:

"Executive producer Michael Chechik was not prepared to concede that as Caucasians, he, Weir and Ciccoritti had no right to make the series, as some have been saying. 'If Ang Lee, a heterosexual Chinese director, could win an Academy Award for Brokeback Mountain, a movie about homosexual cowboys, why shouldn't we be allowed to make a television drama about another racial group in Canada?' he said last month, at an advance Vancouver screening for cast and crew."

I totally agree with his statement. As a Chinese-Canadian writer, I want to know that I have the freedom to write about any topic whether or not it deals with my Asian heritage. I want to be able to write a story about my own roots, but I also want to be able to write about someone's Scottish heritage, provided that I do the research to make the story authentic.

But here's the rub. There's a cynical side of me that reacts to Michael Chechik's very noble statement, and wonders how hard he'd be arguing this point if he wasn't the one who produced the movie. I wonder if he would be arguing this same point if a Chinese writer came to him and pitched him an idea about Caucasian gang members. Also, I'd like to point out that the Ang Lee example isn't exactly the same as Dragon Boys, since Brokeback Mountain was a short story by Annie Proulx that was adapted by Larry McMurtry and Diana Ossana. I don't know these writers' family backgrounds, but I think it's a safe bet to say that they aren't Chinese. In the case of Dragon Boys, the writer is Ian Weir and the director is Jerry Ciccoritti.

This talk about colour and creativity leads me to the question that has plagued me ever since I decided to become a writer in North America. Will producers embrace visible minority artists telling any kind of story, or do they only prefer that established Caucasian writers to be their universal storytellers?

I think the sentiment that was expressed in the Globe and Mail article was totally bang on, even if the foundation of the logic is a bit unstable. Artists of any colour should be able to write about any subject. I only wish wish that this sentiment would carry through when visible minorities try going through the same door that Mr. Checkik, Mr. Ciccoritti and Mr. Weir have walked through. In Canada, I suspect that the door only swings one way, but I might be a bit jaded about television these days.

Anyway, I'm going to check out the show tonight. At the very least, this movie means that Asian actors are getting work. Check your local listings. The show is on CBC Television.

VC Conference - A Close Shave

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Okay, I've just finished the revisions on the first chapter of A Close Shave, the mini-novel that I'm writing for the virtual author-in-residency. Thanks very much to the students for the story starters. I was able to work in Bigfoot with no problem and the celery sticks came in handy. I didn't use the blizzard in Winnipeg yet, because I'm saving it for the second chapter. This has been a very cool writing exercise. I love the idea of getting three random things that I have to incorporate into my writing. It really becomes more of an exercise in problem solving, and I lose a lot of the normal doubts that I have when I come up with something from scratch. I think I'll have to get more people to throw me story starters from now on.

Video Conference

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I have a first draft of the first chapter for the VC writer-in-residency project, and I'm pretty happy with what I have so far. However, I have to cycle through the draft to revise it. Already, I've found some things that just don't work. Sometimes, the first idea is not the best idea, and a writer has to be flexible and self-aware, or else the story will never grow.

The process is like storytelling. When something happens to you, you tell the down and dirty version of the even the first time out. However, as you tell the story to more people, you start to add details and embellish the cool bits and drop the boring bits. Writing is just like that, except for the fact that no one gets to hear the down and dirty version... except for my cats and my wife.

Okay, back to work.

Happy New Year

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I'm back at work now. I'm itching to tackle a few major projects, namely The Forbidden Phoenix and Nearly Normal. I have to revise these plays for workshops over the next four months. In addition, I have to revise The Mystery of the Mad Science Teacher. The best advice I can give myself is to break everything down into bite-sized pieces and take advantage of every moment I have to write. This is going to be a very busy year.